Paragraph Breaks and Why They Matter in 11+ Writing
Address a surprisingly common issue: students who write entire stories as one long paragraph. Explain when to start a new paragraph: change of time, change of place, change of speaker, change of topic, change of mood. Show how paragraph breaks create visual breathing space and help the reader follow the story. Discuss paragraph length: too short feels choppy, too long feels dense. Provide a passage with no paragraphs and ask students to insert breaks in the correct places, then compare with a model answer.